In Part B I really enjoyed how the majority of the stories are about Siddartha, one because I really enjoyed reading the Siddartha book, and two because they have some great messages in the stories that he is in. I feel like the stories are peaceful and really just show that if there is a struggle going on in your life or if you see a struggle going on in someone else's life that it is a good thing to help yourself or the person you see. I really like this message and I feel that using the peaceful way of living that Siddartha shows in the stories in different characters in my stories will make the character more liked by the reader. I think that another thing to work on in my stories would be to change up the dialect a little and maybe inter mix some of the different types of dialect. Not in a confusing way but just in a way that could potentially make the story a bit more interesting.
This represents Siddartha as Buddha
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